tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7352472244109896568.post8633876881517776022..comments2021-08-10T19:21:46.402+05:30Comments on Sampling Life!: Year-End Take on Shayaris…Dharmesh Jainhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16037295809424285269noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7352472244109896568.post-42918583129036185782009-12-27T09:21:01.248+05:302009-12-27T09:21:01.248+05:30Yes!!! Very true... I (too) was bothered by my use...Yes!!! Very true... I (too) was bothered by my use of 'I' in the translation but couldnot help it! because I thought 'उसे' meant 'His' not the 'he' as you point out!<br />Now it's short & sounds nice too... thank you for re-posting! :)Dharmesh Jainhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16037295809424285269noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7352472244109896568.post-88584967229798945672009-12-27T09:14:52.498+05:302009-12-27T09:14:52.498+05:30Isn't the sher in kind of like the third perso...Isn't the sher in kind of like the third person...something like<br />" Lacking is he in the powers to feel <br />One who needs to see to believe for real"DonQuixotehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11782909706381691029noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7352472244109896568.post-59643248533770346632009-12-27T09:00:59.884+05:302009-12-27T09:00:59.884+05:30Thanks for your comment(s)!!!
Yes, Indeed... I th...Thanks for your comment(s)!!!<br />Yes, Indeed... I think that's the 'correct' interpretation and you'd probably nod in agreement to the re-translated sher:<br />"Maybe I do not possess a qualification to feel His presence,<br />But a visual proof is requisite for the belief in His existence!"<br />WOW, Now it rhymes too!!! Thank you very much... :)Dharmesh Jainhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16037295809424285269noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7352472244109896568.post-39808694871869520432009-12-27T08:30:22.622+05:302009-12-27T08:30:22.622+05:30Nice expo on Barelwi Sahab!
...but can't one o...Nice expo on Barelwi Sahab!<br />...but can't one of the interpretations of the last sher's second line be something like<br />"....He who needs visual proof for the existence of the supreme"DonQuixotehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11782909706381691029noreply@blogger.com